My poem- Eternal Life

Greetings and Salutationsnoble readers...
I know I have hardly written anything..just my first post exists so here's a poem I wrote for my journalism class 2 years ago...
I would genuinely appreciate it if you could let me know what you think of it ...
BUT DON'T STEAL IT OR ELSE ...I'll take my sword, get into my armour and chase you till the ends of the earth till I vanquish the mangy cur who plagiarised my work!

Mystical glory doth eternity lend
To life that goes on without an end.
The soul is immortal, it doesn’t speak
And reveal it’s experiences-profound and deep.


Seasons come and seasons go,
Time flies like grains of sand-
Let loose where stormy winds blow,
By direction from the Creator’s hand.


Yet life moves on and on,
In the blink of an eye it’s all gone.
So make the most of your life-
Don’t plague it with unnecessary strife.


Live each day as if it were your last,
Make the most of every single day.
It is futile to live in the past-
Hence, of hope, preserve every ray.